Like the forbidden fruit, the FORBIDDEN WORD, is always sweeter.
Check out my new ‘baby‘.
Posted by sloone on May 25, 2008 in POETICS.
Yeah it`s nice. And we have something interesting which is worth a laugh and indicative of some jealousy. There`s this comment at the `jelas` site:
Political Observer // May 24, 2008 at 12:05 am
What is lacking unfortunately, in most blogs’ comments are such pertinent analysis; Objective analysis with no bias or hidden motives unlike “Susan Loone’s (aka Hutchrun) heavily edited and slanted rabble-rousing blog.
Keep up the good work.
Well, I tried to set the record straight there, unfortunately the comment is not being picked up there for some reason or the other. So I`ll do it here:
Haha my attention has been drawn to the `astute` comment by
`Political Observer // May 24, 2008 at 12:05 am` and most emphatically deny that I`m Susan Loone.
She`s female and i`m male. She`s Chinese and (for political observer`s further edification) I`m `bengali`. So definitely 2 different persons.
So `political observer` all I can say to you is `burn.baby burn` and thanks for the laffs.
Susan, nice poetry you have. Good work.
i like your baby better. 🙂 make poetry and english cool again. 😀
Sounds sweet, tastes sweet, but don’t even touch it……the “apple” I mean. May change the world with just a single bite.
“Even an apple is bigger”. Hehehe. 🙂
Susan, Nice poetry blog.
Poetry should be savoured, slowly, so I’ll take my time to go through it.
I love poetry and this yours is a good one but… ehem.. a bit scary to those who eats the chillies.
I meant the Tsunami poetry.. and Homeless.. Keep it up.
In cyberspace that,s where we can articulate our deepest thoughts without fear and favour. We can savage those whom we see as the dung of the earth with impunity. So all you shit out there if you think you can lord over us with all the unjust laws and actions, beware of the ‘ Forbidden Words’ which will forever come to haunt you and give you nightmares until you cease to exist.
Thanks Susan, is this what you mean by the ‘Forbidden Words’?
bitter followed by sweetness!too sweet end-up with diabetic problems!!!Nice cute pic…………..X-rated
The best poet blogger could be presumed roughly-
Susan loone>cavaseranai (sounds like it) and the only one who can beat both is Ktemoc (with that poet dedicated to Altantuya sharibuu). 😀
Poetry in motion
Generates our emotion
In laughter we cry
In sadness we wry
Poetry=Tears of freedom
fantastic poems, susan! good to see all your poems at one blog (oh but still dark background… luckily no quoted text!). i have a page of poems too but they are all so amateurish (well they were written more than 10 years ago!).
i absolutely loved the poem! and the forbidden fruit picture is pretty nice too.
Hiding in the mind
Yet wanting to go free
Lips wavering sound in silence agree
The acts of many
Deaf and mute display
Engaging yet pretending
The scenes in the minds
Of desire and lust
Of liberation and speech
Yet there are laws
Sadly controlling the traffic flow
Only in closed doors hear
Shame isn’t it?
When you read the lyrics of “Here in my home”
The subtle messages behind the meaning
Putting it beyond censorship cut
The forbidden words narrating it there
Ah the words
Beautiful or negating news
It is beholding to the person
Who dares to say and believe it in?
The forbidden fruit picture is kind of ….erotic….:-)
Thanks guys for paying attention to my poems. Appreciate it. Politics is not my only interest. My poems i have written them over the years, now I think they are ready for an audience. The next would be my art. They deserve a blog, too, but after I’ve scanned the drawings, and organised them.
KK46, erotic is a state of mind. Hahaha 🙂
What about music, Sloone? My fav album of all time is Never mind the bollocks, here are the Sex Pistols.
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